My new ‘Online Story’ – last unit of my MA Writing

Hi Guys,

I’ve just finished my 2,900 word short ‘web story’ that leads you on a sci-fi adventure that crosses web pages, videos and future possibilities.

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This is the last unit of my MA Writing course and I’d love to go out with a good grade.  It would be fantastic if you could read it and let me know if anything breaks for you – or there’s anything you don’t like (or do like, of course!)

It starts here: http://1-4all.net/CatLady_1981/

Thanks in advance guys.

Cheryl